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Guest Guest
| Subject: furry poetry Wed Jun 30, 2010 4:58 pm | |
| this page topic dat i made i hope you injoy...feel free to write pomes dat sute furry topic... enjoy amased by the art, dat came to be amased by the costumes, dat they where in commen of interest, dat we have in commen tho haters ridecule, when miss informed try to stand, when stick togather trolls try and try, yet we still stand strong for those mised informed, we try to teach to this day forwerd, today we march yet furry pride, we laughed at troll this is my pome, i share with you read this pome, i hope you enjoy. for all da furrys, both girls and boys ©2010 |
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Kirill2525 Webmaster
Points : 2147483647 Reputation : 16 Join date : 2010-06-13 Age : 31 Location : wheeling il
| Subject: Re: furry poetry Wed Jun 30, 2010 5:05 pm | |
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Maxi Admin
Points : 392 Reputation : 19 Join date : 2010-06-16 Age : 30 Location : San Antonio Texas
| Subject: Re: furry poetry Wed Jun 30, 2010 6:15 pm | |
| This poem is nothing but win! | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: furry poetry Sat Jul 03, 2010 5:30 am | |
| this is my pome for all my fellow furry out there, its called "furry pride" hope you enjoy in da beginning, there was light. i know what has to be done. to fight da war, between furrys and trolls and to inform those who been misinformed to fight, to fight with honer. to fight with valler, bring peace, for furry pride. to be, or not to be. to the death, or trilled by stone. ©2010 |
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Maxi Admin
Points : 392 Reputation : 19 Join date : 2010-06-16 Age : 30 Location : San Antonio Texas
| Subject: Re: furry poetry Sat Jul 03, 2010 11:56 am | |
| I love you in a non-yiffy way. No Homo. | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: furry poetry Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:56 pm | |
| why thank you |
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Kirill2525 Webmaster
Points : 2147483647 Reputation : 16 Join date : 2010-06-13 Age : 31 Location : wheeling il
| Subject: Re: furry poetry Sat Jul 03, 2010 1:37 pm | |
| you, my friend need to publish this in a book. the first poetry book of furries. i have some poems of myself, not about furrs thoe. most of them are innap for this site but the one .hereis squeaky clean, like a freshly cleaned out condom | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: furry poetry Sat Jul 03, 2010 2:30 pm | |
| hears anether poam i hope you enjoy! it called, searching.
Vinnys searching high and low.
for da map of da treasure chest.
found da bridge, before he crossed
under da bridge was a mean old troll.
in da troll hand, was a treasure map.
all vinny need was a treasure map.
cond da troll, troll was no smart
choped da head, then tooked da map.
when vinny got to da harbor peer
stoll away on da pirate ship
snuck away before one was wiser
found a local's named da trible furs
vinny explained to the trible furs
about da treasure, made of gold.
when they found da treasure of gold.
turnd out to be an empty chest.
now vinny stuck on the island as well.
drinking gekila, rum and coke
waching sunsets with his friends
dat da treasure made of gold ©2010 |
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Kirill2525 Webmaster
Points : 2147483647 Reputation : 16 Join date : 2010-06-13 Age : 31 Location : wheeling il
| Subject: Re: furry poetry Sat Jul 03, 2010 2:33 pm | |
| nice work, my advice, add a © symbol to them you doo that be entering & copy ; but with out the spaces | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: furry poetry Sat Jul 03, 2010 2:44 pm | |
| - Kirill2525 wrote:
- nice work, my advice, add a © symbol to them you doo that be entering & copy ; but with out the spaces
im on my wii most of da time dats how i use de internet but when im on da compay at da librery i will keep dat in mind. k? |
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Kirill2525 Webmaster
Points : 2147483647 Reputation : 16 Join date : 2010-06-13 Age : 31 Location : wheeling il
| Subject: Re: furry poetry Sat Jul 03, 2010 2:53 pm | |
| ill just do it for u than. | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: furry poetry Sat Jul 03, 2010 3:13 pm | |
| only if you think its necessary tho |
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Kirill2525 Webmaster
Points : 2147483647 Reputation : 16 Join date : 2010-06-13 Age : 31 Location : wheeling il
| Subject: Re: furry poetry Sat Jul 03, 2010 3:21 pm | |
| well some1 can steel ur work then | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: furry poetry Sat Jul 03, 2010 3:27 pm | |
| ok im convinced i will let you help |
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TheMeowingFox Admin
Points : 385 Reputation : 16 Join date : 2010-06-18 Age : 31 Location : in your hardrive !
| Subject: Re: furry poetry Sat Jul 03, 2010 8:47 pm | |
| oh, those are quite nice. you do know that proper english is 'that' instead of 'dat'. and heres a tip for sharing these with the open public, it would be good to revise your poetry and other literary works with proper english. now, for just slang chat its alriight. but im sure if you ever plan to get your works published, a revision is quite needed. | |
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TheMeowingFox Admin
Points : 385 Reputation : 16 Join date : 2010-06-18 Age : 31 Location : in your hardrive !
| Subject: Re: furry poetry Sat Jul 03, 2010 8:48 pm | |
| i;m often refered to as the grammer nazi, so if my critique offended you, well dont be ^w^ i'm always looking out to help others. | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: furry poetry Sat Jul 03, 2010 8:53 pm | |
| thanks |
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Maxi Admin
Points : 392 Reputation : 19 Join date : 2010-06-16 Age : 30 Location : San Antonio Texas
| Subject: Re: furry poetry Sat Jul 03, 2010 9:03 pm | |
| Kitsune-san! Would you say that to EE Cummings?!?! | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: furry poetry Sat Jul 03, 2010 10:53 pm | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: furry poetry Mon Jul 05, 2010 2:28 am | |
| In the forest, was a little town. At this town, was an inn. In this inn, was a party. Everybody was partying, except a drunken Bunny, named Hoppedy. Now, you are wondering why, he not having any fun. well, everybody at school used to picked on him and say, "hay Hoppedy! Why are you so hopping mad?" And everyone would tease him, and torment the little poor Rabbit. Then one day, he was walking through the forest, and he stumbled across a sword. And the inscriptions sead: "HE WHO FOUND THIS SWORD, SHELL HAVE 3 WISHES!" Then then Rabbit had an idea. He picked up the sword, and the sword spoke, and sead. "WHAT IS YOUR FIRST WISH?" The Bunny replied. "I wish everybody would stop picking on me!" "DONE WHAT IS YOUR SECOND WISH?" "I wish i was rich." "DONE!" "WHAT IS YOUR LAST WISH?" Then, the Rabbit thought for a bit. Then smiled, and sead. I wiched "I Wish I've have a wife named jin." "IT IS DONE" Then the sword birst in to nothing, and Hoppedy went home. And well Hoppedy was walking back to town, he notice that everyone stop picking on him. He went to the inn, sat down at the bar, then the Racoon next to him sead, "hay Rich want some jin?" Well then, everybody stops picking on him, he got what he wish for, except, he married to a bottle of jin, well everyone calls him, Rich? ©2010 |
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